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Sep 05, 2007
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I Promise
I promise you my loyalty
I promise for you I’ll pray,
and I’ll remain right by your side
no matter, come what may.
I promise to be careful
when you trust me to hold your hand,
and should you prefer to walk alone
I promise to understand;
and should your soul get weary
and tired before journey’s end,
I’ll do my best to comfort you
and I promise to be your friend.
My promises aren’t empty
there as timeless as eternity,
the easy thing about it is
you’d do the same for me.
I’ve one final promise,
a promise sent from God above…
..I’ll cherish and I’ll treasure you,
for you taught me how to love.
— docmaverick, Sep 05, 2007
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Jillian Botha
18 years 9 months ago
A promise made in the sincerest of manners.....
docmaverick
18 years 9 months ago
my friend...