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Too Sweet

 

Too sweet she was,
the pickle not a dill.

 

Of way too many
I had had my fill—
enough to make me ill
and have to take
an after-pickle pill
(I knew the drill).

 

My desire for her
dropped far downhill.

 

But after all of that,
I love her still.

 

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ladywriter

18 years 8 months ago

Too Sweet

I love this poem; very much. It was done to perfection. ladywriter
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

I hopped into this...

and found it a tasty read. An after pickle pill!Even out here there is none of those.I should find some they may come in handy.I ran-out on a marvelous woman,smart move that felt so wrong. In Ink, Dabbler