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IKnowNoBox
Sep 03, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

T.E.A.R.S. A.R.E. F.O.R. S.O.R.R.O.W.

Torn
Endangered
And
Running
Swiftly

Against
Restrictive
Entanglements

Falling
On
Rocks

Swimming
Our
Raging
Rivers
Of
Wonder

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 03, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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Mark

Mark

18 years 9 months ago

Great Form

iknow... a sad smile on my face as I just don't remember what this poetry style is called (an odd name that I do know). It has been a while since I have read one. The last stanza is a great one ! Thanks, Mark L
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 9 months ago

I was told something along the lines of...

acrosstics,however they apply this to a looser form that allows for a sentance or prose to follow the original piece.Oh stay tuned I have a few various ways of presenting this. Thank you, I. K.N.O.W. N.O. B.O.X.
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barbsdad2003

18 years 9 months ago

I So Enjoy ...

your expression of intrepidity ... along with a sliver or two of humor. Thanx for the pleasure, Chuck PS: I suspect you mean Raging Rivers, which has a different meaning from Ragging Rivers. But if you intended Ragging, that's what you meant. Of course.
Mark

Mark

18 years 9 months ago

Poe was the master

I have not challenged myself with an acrostic but it seems like a good idea Jess and will be sure to send you the link (I hate crossword puzzles too) I will make the words rofl