T.E.A.R.S. A.R.E. F.O.R. S.O.R.R.O.W.

Torn
Endangered
And
Running
Swiftly

Against
Restrictive
Entanglements

Falling
On
Rocks

Swimming
Our
Raging
Rivers
Of
Wonder

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 03, 2007

About the Author

Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

Critiques

Mark

18 years 10 months ago

Great Form

iknow... a sad smile on my face as I just don't remember what this poetry style is called (an odd name that I do know). It has been a while since I have read one. The last stanza is a great one ! Thanks, Mark L

IKnowNoBox

18 years 10 months ago

I was told something along the lines of...

acrosstics,however they apply this to a looser form that allows for a sentance or prose to follow the original piece.Oh stay tuned I have a few various ways of presenting this. Thank you, I. K.N.O.W. N.O. B.O.X.

IKnowNoBox

18 years 10 months ago

What resources you must posses ...

to come up with the answer, two other people where looking as well.Could you refer an example? Thanks in advance, Inn Obox

barbsdad2003

18 years 10 months ago

I So Enjoy ...

your expression of intrepidity ... along with a sliver or two of humor. Thanx for the pleasure, Chuck PS: I suspect you mean Raging Rivers, which has a different meaning from Ragging Rivers. But if you intended Ragging, that's what you meant. Of course.

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

While I love the sincerity of you poetry

I dislike acrostics. Also don't like crossword puzzles. Just my personal opinion. cheers, Jess

Mark

18 years 10 months ago

Poe was the master

I have not challenged myself with an acrostic but it seems like a good idea Jess and will be sure to send you the link (I hate crossword puzzles too) I will make the words rofl

IKnowNoBox

18 years 10 months ago