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IKnowNoBox
Sep 03, 2007 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

S.I.L.K. R.O.S.E.S. A R.E. F.O.R. L.O.V.E.

Soft
Innocent
Little
Kisses

Remembering
One
Single
Evening
Smiling

A
Romantic
Embrace

Feelings
Of
Release

Letting
Our
Visions
Entwine
.

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 03, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

The poem is good

but dislike acrostics. To me the word play takes away from the sincerity. cheers, Jess
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JulieMcCarty

18 years 10 months ago

I am blown away

I am amazed by this stlye of writing. I have never seen anything like this before. It is so cool. I hope you might be able to give me some insight on how you come up with these. I would love to learn and maybe give it a try. Julie
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 10 months ago

When you Lose phrase ....

come back to the same picture expanding from It.Between the poem. and the phrase Avoiding the words of the original in dupilacate unless it fits so right.Maybe try,ANGELS ON HIGH,Or GODS PEOPLE not to hard,A SILENT PRAYER? It is Okay to use Cliche as a Base. God luck and I look forward to your acrostic debute

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