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The Dabbler

The Dabbler

Back in medieval times during the new renaissance there was a proud toy maker, so successful people from far and wide would come to look at, and buy his closely guarded secret new gizmo-whirly toy wonder. He made a modest living and held off against the competition from the (made-to-be-broken) Toy Makers Guild. His secret to success was that when his toys weren’t selling he passed his time repairing broken toys for donations or trade. This also allowed him to study what children cherished most among their toys.

As he became older he decided to open a position for an apprentice on the town crier board, at a glance he felt, he would know the right lad for the task.The day came when he saw that very lad in of all the people, a petty thief hanging from the shackle of a jailer. Caught up in the guild sweeps without proper papers, he was surely a goner. However the toy maker assured the guard that there was obviously a mistake, that the lad worked for him and surely they wouldn’t lock up an old mans only apprentice? The lad quick to catch-on walked away a free character, reluctantly he accepted the toy makers offer of fare and an oversized closet to sleep in exchange for odd jobs around the shop. As time passed the old man without the knowledge of the lad began to set aside a small pension in the lads name.

When he felt the time was right he also gave the lad, now a man, the secret to his success. “Use surprise”he went on, “to bring the customer to you.”, and as an after thought. “Never let the (made- to-break) Toy Makers Guild get any idea what your new toy is!”

Sadly the toy maker became ill and weak with a delirium that grew stronger by the day. The doctors called the sanitarium, and the sanitarium told the apprentice a stay would be good for the worn toy maker, and presented him with a payment plan for admittance to better his enjoyment of his last days.

The Toy Shop was slow, and not due for market any time soon, and they were getting by repairing broken toys just to eat. With a great dilemma before him and the well being of the old man on his heart, he happened upon an agent from the Toy Makers Guild who mentioned that for the information about the type of material of the newest prototype they would pay plenty enough to give the old man a long stay. The apprentice accepted the offer going immediately to the sanitarium to make the required arrangements. Doing so was the hardest thing he ever did, returning to the old man, still delirious and incoherent, he knew not whether to tell the old man what he had done or let him die with peace of mind.

Then by chance the cat died by poison, and it was found that the old man as well had been poisoned too. He began to recover slowly, as the Guild released the next new gizmo to the masses, promising to close the shop for good.

As appointed the sanitarium came to pick up the delirious toy maker, already found to be incompetent. The apprentice not being able to tell the toy maker what he had done let them take him away. Then cleaning out his closet he left the shop for the last time. Some say he went mad from the dilemma he committed himself to… yet children are still told that leaving their broken toys in the closet will eliminate the monsters, assure them the things they need, and the Dabbler will leave a well organized closet that others may have peace of mind that he denies himself… that is the tale of the Dabbler.

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 02, 2007

About This Poem

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

Remember this s is poetry site

One of my definitions of poetry is compression of meaning. this was a story, not a poem. As such i did mot give it a serious reading,Sorry man cheers, Jess
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 9 months ago

I find certain people ....

fufil certain roles in my life constant roles you my friend are a challenger the person that will keep me from the broad track of writer ruin.a hinderance to me becoming a one trick pony,i will in an inspired wind make this story a poem. Thanks for the sinus' blast. David
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

Not necessarily

This site, with all due respect to it's creators, is not built well for stories. I don't think the internet is. It's ok to read a few lines of poetry, but a story hurts your eyes on screen. Just a techno-reality. Andrew, who is the prime progenitor of this site might agree with me. Unless people are prepared to print a story out on paper (I don't even have a printer) they are just not appropriate for the illumined screen. Not your failing, or this sites, a techno thing. cheers, Jess
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 6 months ago

Thank you Mike

I have been telling this tale (I am a story teller)along with others as I grew up.Toys and the people that make toys... In ink, David
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 6 months ago

I finally read this

and was deeply touched, saddened and even uplifted. Thanks man, you know I still have some toys that I got as a small child, 45 years ago, the ones that don't break. None kept the monster out of the closet or from under the bed though. cheers, Jess p.s. you know this piece needs some serious editing for punctuation etc, would you like me to edit and send it to you?
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 6 months ago

That Elf would be a present from your birthday to mine

Thank you and I except your offer thank you. In ink, dabbler I have three other stories burning holes in my brain. Two I told as a tramp and one that i feel is set for a movie. The lack of a happy ending is essentil to this story. but the redemtion is stated the best I could. if you need filler I have some insert still just nudge me along as you seem to do so well. In ink, David ps Thanks for the Red Ink.
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 6 months ago

will do, gladly

but not soon, am spending my next 48 hours celebrating surviving 50 years. soon after. cheers, Jess
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 6 months ago

p.s.

I refuse to take responsibility for any comments I post from now till 2nd December. If anyone complains just tell them i am on a Hunter S Thompson thing and will be back in force by Dec 3rd. cheers, Jess