haiku

the jungle trees break

as the elephant passes

nothing will stop it

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 02, 2007

Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

18 years 10 months ago

There is one thing that will stop an elephant but I for one certainly do not want to face a charging elephant ! very cool Haikus ! Thanks, Mark L

18 years 10 months ago

Haiku to me is the most perfect form of poetry, but it needs more than just a powerful image, it needs meaning cheers, Jess

18 years 10 months ago

Please read "Adrift" and "Tundra" Thank you for your valued insight. In ink, Dabbler

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