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haiku

the jungle trees break

as the elephant passes

nothing will stop it

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 02, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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Mark

Mark

18 years 9 months ago

Nice IKnow

There is one thing that will stop an elephant but I for one certainly do not want to face a charging elephant ! very cool Haikus ! Thanks, Mark L
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

Again I say

Haiku to me is the most perfect form of poetry, but it needs more than just a powerful image, it needs meaning cheers, Jess
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

Thank you Jess

Please read "Adrift" and "Tundra" Thank you for your valued insight. In ink, Dabbler