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Aug 31, 2007
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You're Beautiful
Life’s easier for you because you’re beautiful
for me it’s not the same,
I appear irresponsible
treating life as if a game.
Your beauty comes from deep inside
your life force rules your day,
we’re completely different
for mine gets in my way.
Your lovely, sweet, and quiet grace
helps make you beautiful,
your essence has a brighter shine
where mine is simply dull.
I’m not making excuses
I’m just contemplating fact,
your beauty shines out from your soul
and tells you how to act.
But I’ll keep plodding through life
trying to learn, as on I go,
for having seen your beauty
has helped more than you know.
— docmaverick, Aug 31, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 9 months ago
While what you say is true enough, generally