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IKnowNoBox
Aug 30, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Yikes

 Kaz I wanted to take you

 back in a time machine

          to tell you

   Without a dought

   your poetic smiles

       healed me

  you are genuine...

 

 I want you to know this

  in your time of dougt

   Words Kill Cancer

  and you are a Doll

      

   

— IKnowNoBox, Aug 30, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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purplemoondoll

18 years 9 months ago

OK!

Haven't a clue what this poem is about?? Is it about anything in particular - or just one of those random moments? Anyway it made me smile. BUT there is a typo methinks...dought?? or should that be doubt? Thanks - Kaz
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 9 months ago

Not soup yet...

This one I believe without a doubt (thank you),is... part of my S.E.C.R.E.T. P.R.O.J.E.C.T. I never used Yikes in a work before. Smiles are so much better then stars,because stars can only be seen at night. Stay tuned, Dabbler
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

Stay tuned

Thank you for the laughter,the smiles and the ?'s. In Ink, Dabbler
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Ancientone

18 years 7 months ago

I add....

my thoughts and best wishes to Kaz, a real doll as my compatriate wrote. :) Though not so poetic, the message is clear and sweet! Patrick/AO
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purplemoondoll

18 years 7 months ago

Thank you from the bottom of my heart

This has made my day! and thanks to you too AO! As you can see things are fine - this was taken today and there is still a way to go BUT that purple moon is still smiling! Thanks again! This forum is awesome! Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.