Yikes

Kaz I wanted to take you

back in a time machine

to tell you

Without a dought

your poetic smiles

healed me

you are genuine...

I want you to know this

in your time of dougt

Words Kill Cancer

and you are a Doll

— IKnowNoBox, Aug 30, 2007

About the Author

Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

Critiques

purplemoondoll

18 years 10 months ago

OK!

Haven't a clue what this poem is about?? Is it about anything in particular - or just one of those random moments? Anyway it made me smile. BUT there is a typo methinks...dought?? or should that be doubt? Thanks - Kaz

IKnowNoBox

18 years 10 months ago

Not soup yet...

This one I believe without a doubt (thank you),is... part of my S.E.C.R.E.T. P.R.O.J.E.C.T. I never used Yikes in a work before. Smiles are so much better then stars,because stars can only be seen at night. Stay tuned, Dabbler

IKnowNoBox

18 years 10 months ago

Stay tuned

Thank you for the laughter,the smiles and the ?'s. In Ink, Dabbler

Ancientone

18 years 8 months ago

I add....

my thoughts and best wishes to Kaz, a real doll as my compatriate wrote. :) Though not so poetic, the message is clear and sweet! Patrick/AO

purplemoondoll

18 years 8 months ago

Thank you from the bottom of my heart

This has made my day! and thanks to you too AO! As you can see things are fine - this was taken today and there is still a way to go BUT that purple moon is still smiling! Thanks again! This forum is awesome! Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.

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