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Life
Life
Lost in the whirl wind of life
Drowning in a sea of emotions
Is this what we call life?
Is this what there is to expect from the past, present and future?
The past, one starts out, innocent and untouched
With a whole universe of possibilities awaiting discovery
One is curious and reckless, inquiring and brave
But most of all one is happy and care free
The present, in the here and now
One is learning lessons, experiencing the highs and the lows
Very seldom realizing the path that will be chosen
Could lead to something that soon ends up broken
The future, alive with opportunity and joy
This is what is said to make the future a cheerful prospect
Little does one know or even begin to suspect
The future for some is a dark and unforgiving place
Life is what the individual makes of it, so it is said
Then answer this, why does the good person always finish last?
Kicked in the teeth by fate
And this individual gets up, tries to remember the past
This person dusts themselves off, and tries again
Is it worth it, this thing called life, destiny
Call it by whatever name you choose to
There are those moments how ever, that make it all worthwhile
Your first love, the new feelings
Butterflies in the tummy, the heart skipping a beat
That feeling of total belonging that strikes
The discovery of the meaning of love
Your first born child, that first cry
It grabs at your soul and your heart
And from the first moment of breath you are caught
Up in a life long, powerful and indescribable emotion
The emotion that comes with the entry to parenthood
So as difficult as it can get
As bleak as it sometimes does tend to look
There is a lot more to life, a lot more that is good
Search for the strength to prevail
Discover a wealth of patience, perseverance and resolve
It is ok to feel defeated; we all do at one time or another
Be you a woman or a man, father or mother
The trick to life, is to grab it by the ears
Look it deep in the eyes and imprint it in your mind
Hold on to it, do not let go
And you might be surprised at what you will find
Critiques
purplemoondoll
18 years 9 months ago
This I can really relate to