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The Audacity of Love

It can greet you as an equal

compliment you like a friend,

can give you a new begining

or assault you with an end.

Can trick you into believing

that what you think you know is true,

and make you feel like an idiot

as lonliness swallows you.

Life wouldn’t be much without it

there wouldn’t even be grace from above,

we all experience it in many forms

that’s the audacity of love.

It can also bring you comfort

and can ease your worried mind,

soothe you when you’re lonely

teach you to be color blind;

soften the hardest of hearts

give you the spirit of a dove,

kill hatred with a knowing glance

that’s the audacity of love.

— docmaverick, Aug 28, 2007

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

JB

Jillian Botha

18 years 9 months ago

I Loved this one!!!!

Hi Docmaverick In my personal opinion you caught every definition there is to put to the word love and put it into this write...... Everything you have said here is true and real. And you are correct in calling this " The Audacity of love" Perfect title for a very good write!!! Thank you for this!! Kind regards Feebie Mistakes happen, do not dwell on them, live them, mourn them and move on to better things. (PS: if that does not work eat lots and lots of chocolate)
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

Doc, I think this is the best of yours I have read

These last 3 postings show a big development and... well what the hell have you been doing? Studying? Reading? Living? I know you are into magic, as am I, but you have clearly not drawn on any dark powers! I do know that this was an audacious subject and you handled it with intelligence, compassion and style. cheers, Jess