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SAKTHEEE2007
Aug 28, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Sweets,Money,Time

 Sweets, Money and Time         Sweets      They never know      Theirs taste- delicious or bitter        Money      Rules this world ,      God and heaven too.        Time      That rules the poor and

     serves the rich.

 

SAKTHI RAVICHADNRAN

    
— SAKTHEEE2007, Aug 28, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

Sakkthee! I am shocked!

this sounds almost cynical! "Money Rules this world , God and heaven too." but deep too, loved the last stanza, cheers, Jess