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The number 2

 

The number 2

 

sensations long forgotten, experienced what feels like a life time ago

feelings of sensual anticipation that started to flow

to once again feel the promise of pleasure

and once again have happy memories to treasure

 

this was what the number two brought her

touch felt as never before, sending shivers up her spine

thoughts that she was no longer desired left far behind

as his touch confirmed to her, “she’s mine”

 

to feel that she was desired and wanted

as a sexual being, filled with the power. The promise

one can only gain from being a newly awakened woman

a woman who has had a whole new world opened to her

 

to once again, feel, be left breathless with wanting

clueless to the heights of pleasure that could be reached

educated by him to the heights that only he can take her to

to cause the sensations and memories of the night she experienced raw passion once again

 

 

 

— Feebie, Aug 27, 2007

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Region, Country: Gauteng, ZMB

Favorite Poets: Sylvia Plath, Robert Frost

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purplemoondoll

18 years 9 months ago

Nice Job

Sensual and full of emotion. Why no 2? Watch you typing on this one:- once can only gain from a newly awakened woman Doesn't read right? And:- touch felt as never before, sending a shivers up her spine Should be missing the 'a' methinks? Might be others so it might be worth checking through again. Cheers - Kaz
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Jillian Botha

18 years 9 months ago

*blushes*

Hi kaz Oi to be honest i do not know how missed those , but thank you ever so much for pointing them out to me :-) the number two, because this took place on the second day of the month, and for that reason is why i called this on the number 2. Do you think i should change the title here? Thanks for the feedback kind regards Feebie Mistakes happen, do not dwell on them, live them, mourn them and move on to better things. (PS: if that does not work eat lots and lots of chocolate)
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purplemoondoll

18 years 9 months ago

Feebie

The title caught my attention so I would personally stay with it. Thanks for explaining the story! BTW love your signature lol, chocolate gets my vote everytime! Kaz