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Your brutal indiscretion
Your brutal indiscretion
Words of love left unsaid
Words that should have been spoken
Were left out in the cold void instead
Causing a heart to be so carelessly broken
Changes constantly were made
In both personality and actions
Leaving her feeling so afraid
That she would never meet your satisfactions
She never really succeeded did she?
Your brutality was proof of this
No matter how subtle she tried to be
You were always so quick to dismiss
All her efforts, all her love
All this done in vain
Eventually all this brought her
Was a constant heart wrenching pain
This pain felt emotionally
To the core of her very being
This pain felt physically
After each blow from you once loving hands
The first blow left her reeling
The second left her bruised
The third left her broken
The final found her pleading
A plea which you ignored
A plea that fell on deaf ears
One that for her still echoes
And will do so for many years
You nearly succeeded in breaking her will
You nearly won dominion over her body
But you never gained guardianship
Over her spirit or her soul
Do you think back on those times?
Do you even recall, the damage you inflicted
Your present actions display that in fact you do not at all
The day will come, your moment will arrive
When you will cling to all you hold dear
Just to keep your spirit alive
And when this moment comes to light
When her past becomes your present
Ask yourself one question
Will you have the her strength and dignity,
Will you possess the iron will to fight and survive?
Critiques
purplemoondoll
18 years 9 months ago
Like this
purplemoondoll
18 years 9 months ago
Sorry Feebie
Conect11
18 years 9 months ago
there
weirdelf
18 years 8 months ago
For once I disagree with Mark
Jillian Botha
18 years 8 months ago
Indiscrection.......play on words i guess
weirdelf
18 years 8 months ago
thanks for listening
JulieMcCarty
18 years 8 months ago
I really felt this