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barbsdad2003
Aug 30, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

more than willing

 

it’s grossly out of shape

my nose you bent

 

when you spread right on

your vile deodorant.

 

please may I suggest

you take it off

 

via amply fruitful shower.

 

I’d be more than willing

to watch and wait

 

for p’raps another hour.

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Quillsvein1

18 years 8 months ago

again

your trademark humor pays a visit into your customarily sophisticated style--there are times when people around me have had such BO that i've wanted to turn around and offer them the deodorant in my gym bag. i mean actually do it. neat poem!
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

A true humor of sense.

I once again see that command of senses.I do appreciate a pleasent oil,even a light insence,but the chemiacal warfare has to end. Have you any puns? Dabbler
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barbsdad2003

18 years 8 months ago

Yup! Yup!

I do. For one example: My memory ails and often fails, but as to whether she/he removed offending deodorant, icon Betty/she dint. Thanx, Chuck
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 7 months ago

A Pee You To The Foo Foo

I'de raither smell poo poo! LLaL Can The Cemicals Smell the humans,RNSL Accual signs at a rally against a perfume manufacture!