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A Street light and my night

It was a dim and yellow tungston light

which illuminated my street at nights

Many of my villagers rescued form the dog bites

cause of it’s service ,We survived.

It was the only light of our street but

our street was more than  a  furlong straight

It would sleep in new moon nights  but

it added glory to my street

There were a lot of stories about it

which guarded our cattles  in nights

It gave a rank to a poor student

Yes .He is a………..   ……….. …………

SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN

 

 

— SAKTHEEE2007, Aug 24, 2007

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purplemoondoll

18 years 9 months ago

Lovely Story

Thank for sharing this its a great story! Just one thing to watch - spacing missed in line 6 but apart from that this is beautifully crafted! Kaz
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

A haunting piece

that comments deeply on our different cultures. Have you given feedback to anyone else recently? cheers, Jess