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Aug 28, 2007
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first she waxed ten
there once was a child
went backward in time.
first she waxed ten,
then came to nine.
I saw her then,
at her age of just nine:
she looked awful,
an’ I, blurting, said,
from the mouth at the front
of my head,
What’s happened to you?
you look terrible for nine,
in my view,
I opine.
sorry to malign,
but that’s not a a good sign.
I distinctly do remember—
at the back of my mind
while I peel this fine orange rind—
at ten you were fine;
that you looked,
as a matter of fact,
then quite divine.
Comments
purplemoondoll
18 years 8 months ago
Like it!
barbsdad2003
18 years 8 months ago
Thank you, thank you!
barbsdad2003
18 years 8 months ago
Incidentally, no