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How Dare You

How dare you

Break me down like this

Without the puzzle piece that fits

How could you

Allow me to believe

In you, that took all of me

Why did I

Care so much for you

Knew you’d never see me through

How come you

Never told me so

That all this time you wanted to go

And now I sit and contemplate

Was it me or is it fate

How dare you

Make me feel this way

Leaving me

No room to say

The moments brought me to my knees

How could you make me beg and plead

For just a moment of your time

Wishing you would still be mine

How dare you

— searchursoul, Aug 20, 2007

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orgami

18 years 10 months ago

heart in a labrynth

oh those puzzle peices contours of the soul

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