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Aug 20, 2007
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Thank you Razor Blade
The cool metal slides across my skin
Oh my god, I love that feeling
The feeling of pain
And what could be
The sweet scent is in the air
The sweetness of life
Seeping from my veins
And the razor gave me
This sweet release
I thank it
With every fiber left
In my being
It has been a great
Help
It has been my only
Friend
The one who always
Gave me
What I wanted
It gave me the greatest
Gift of all
It gave me death
— CryingPagan89, Aug 20, 2007
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Word
18 years 10 months ago
Thanks
Lenny of Cohen
18 years 10 months ago
Brutal
Mark
18 years 10 months ago
Yes it is
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
I do it with fire
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