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Thank You

Thank you for the blue skies, that fill my eyes, and the green grass that grows beyond the tall trees

For the privalige of watching all four seasons, summer, winter, spring and fall, come back every year, just to pay me a call

For flowing streams and sun beams, grapes of plenty, and all these beautiful things

For all the animals great and small, and the mountains you made to stretch wide and tall

But most of all, I thank you for, a beautiful heart and sensitive being, the beauty inside that gives me meaning

— TONI SEARS, Aug 20, 2007

Critiques

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orgami

18 years 10 months ago

suprize

its so pleasant to read a well put together poem that praises someones view upon whats out there today i live in the north and its true i love the seasons so i can relate to the poems message of being thankful looking forward to all of your emotive poetry but again this was a great suprise ..O..
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searchursoul

18 years 10 months ago

I love that your very

I love that your very thankful, I also have one named thank you, the only thing that got me a lil stuck was the flow, it doesn't have a steady beat, but other than that I think its beautiful.

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