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My Savior

Many times I have looked to the heavens

Only seeing gray

 Satan draining the color from my soul

Not thinking to close my eyes and open my heart

letting the Lord refill my easel

Afraid to make my journey alone, I keep unclean company

Dragging me down the road to my own damnation

Unable to break free from the tight grasp on my hands

Following blindly to a place unknown

Wearily walking, hoping to escape my past

only to find it has run ahead to stare me in the face with it’s unforgiving grin

I walk with one eye open

hoping to see only partially the Hell I have created for myself

Longing to forget the evils I have committed

By chance, we come upon a stranger

I’m to ashamed to raise my head

He frees’ me from my captors,Frightening them with His presence

He takes my hand and leads me to the road of redemption

Freeing my soul completely.Wiping away every unseen tear

Filling my heart with gladness

Never to leave me unprotected

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

this poem speaks to me

about everything i hate about christianity and christian culture. Humanity is good, only the evil concept of original sin makes people think that they deserve the bad things that happen. I detest that idea with every fiber of my being. We are good, only the concept of sin and greed makes us bad. Even when bad things happen we can choose goodness. But we are less likely to when the bible tells us we are born bad. Screw the bible. Just choose goodness. cheers, Jess
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Conect11

18 years 7 months ago

Julie,

I was moved by this, and a comment on yours recently on somebody elses perhaps a touch biggoted poem that I wanted to let you know I empathize with your feelings. I was having a rough stretch recently where I was dog paddling in my own sin, had missed church for a few weeks, and being generally insincere in my faith. (ever had that, where you pray one thing, knowing, knowing you don't intend to hold up your end? I know that well.) So I was pretty down on myself, feeling guilty as I got into my car to go to work. I listen to 103.3 FM WCRF, the radio station for the Moody Bible Institute. If you don't have Moody radio you can find it on www.wcrfradio.org. It's extremely uplifting, non judgemental, and non denominational. They format it just like a modern radio station, news, sports, traffic, weather but with an eye towards Christ. Anyhow, it seems like whatever I'm going through when I tune into the station they're talking exactly about my situation, or there's a show on about it, etc. Anyhow that morning I tuned in and there was this new song by Casting Crowns playing, I had never heard it before. In it, the singer speculates that he has finally done enough to piss God off entirely, then he sees that Jesus knows "Just how far the east is from the west," about how he knows how disconnected we are from Him, yet has overwhelming patience and love for us. You reminded me of this with this poem and your comment. I was very emotionally and spiritually impressed by this. Mark W.
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JulieMcCarty

18 years 7 months ago

Thanks

for all of your comments! I know not every one shares the same beliefs as me and I appreciate that. I know what works for me and I am happy with it. I always look for the good in people hoping that I can touch one person letting them know they are speial and needed here on this earth and they are loved even when they feel that they are not. I was saved from my bigest enemy, myself! and I will always be thankful the the Lord for that.He opened my eyes to my self distruction and even though I do not go to church I have my own church here in my heart. Thanks again everyone! Sincerly, Julie