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Aug 20, 2007
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MY FIRST POEM
She is my first poem
I read her to enjoy the life
Her beauty is the metaphor of the nature
I mingled in it to reach the peak of lust
Her talks are rhythm
I memorised them to recreate my desires
Herface is beauty pool
I dwelled in it to refresh my thoughts
My collection starts from her
and will end only with her..
SAKTHIRAVICHANDRAN
— SAKTHEEE2007, Aug 20, 2007
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purplemoondoll
18 years 9 months ago
Of all your poems so far