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Waking Inside Up

 

 

Fuzzy, whispered words

    spread silent fog

and cotton softness

 

across the landscape of my soul

 

I, attentive, listen

   to the fulsome silence,

 

spread my self

    into the fog,

 

every soular cell in me

   baptized

 

Whispered, fuzzy words

            dissolve

into music and melody –

 

a choir of angels –

 

a deeply familiar,

                                               distant tune

 

In exultation,

I sing along

the soundtrack of my life

 

Mozart would be pleased

 

8/19/07

 

— waterdragon, Aug 19, 2007

Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

Listen to those voices!

(wish I heard them more often) and I'm sure he would be. The structure itself bespeaks the poems impromptuness and works perfectly cheers, Jess

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