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Aug 19, 2007
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#84
If i fell out of the boat, would you jump in after me?
Hold a board so we could float off to our destiny?
On the lines that fate relies
It’s all just lies beneith our eyes
Is fate the reality?
And is the mirror exactly what we see?
The color that blinds me
is the color of your energy
Pick my hands up just to slap the floor
is this fate what we are dieing for….?
— washing tears, Aug 19, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 9 months ago
I get what you are saying