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SLoEDdie
Aug 19, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

lonely kiss


 

Promise me

Tonight

you’ll find me

And kiss me

Even if only in a dream

 

 

i miss you!

 

— SLoEDdie, Aug 19, 2007
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purplemoondoll

18 years 10 months ago

Nice job

short to the point and beautifully crafted - like this a lot
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ladywriter

18 years 10 months ago

sloEDdie

I love this piece. Not many words are needed; you said it all. ladywriter
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charlieweinberg

18 years 10 months ago

your kiss

love it, brilliant, well done. thanks for posting this, it's great and really difficult to do. Joyful Noise
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TONI SEARS

18 years 10 months ago

lonely kiss

SLOeDIE, This poem is very,warm and gentle, I really like the way it sounds, it is beautiful. keep doing what you doing tonisears/akafabulous
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SLoEDdie

18 years 10 months ago

Thanks everyone

for all your support, it means a lot to me and i really appreciate it!
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Prototype

18 years 10 months ago

Nice one!

This one make me go like "awwww..." This poem it's like a ice crystal, perfect.
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himitsu

18 years 10 months ago

lonely kiss

beautiful words from a beautiful soul...
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barbsdad2003

18 years 10 months ago

Charming!

Brief and right to the point make this a charmer. My congratulations and thanx, Chuck
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himitsu

18 years 8 months ago

lonely kiss

i promise...

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