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Those Miles Between Us
A few moments ago you crossed my mind.
The thoughts were kind;
sort of mild
sort of wild
For once
I did not lose much sleep last night,
Oh! You were there, don’t get me wrong.
You held me tight and something tells me
you were aware that you were there,
all night
I sit here and I smile a gentle smile because,
you sit on the north end and I sit on the south end,
of those treacherous miles between us.
The miles between us never did like us,
they worked on us, and against us.
In the winter the miles would smile, because
it would cover itself with rain, sleet & snow,
testing our love to see if it would grow
and to see how far we would go
How sad you saw the miles between us
with a magnifying glass,
and I saw them from the sky
To me the miles were an inch apart,
but to you it was a world apart,
and you did not need me that far
away from you. You needed me there and
closer, to fulfill those special
needs that you have.
So now once again, the miles
has covered himself with the rain,
the sleet and the snow
And once again,
You sit on the north end and
I sit on the south end,
with those treacherous miles
between us.
Those treacherous miles smiles
because he thinks… he has won,
once more
Critiques
SLoEDdie
18 years 10 months ago
Touching
purplemoondoll
18 years 10 months ago
Nice job
ladywriter
18 years 10 months ago
Kaz
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
Dig this,
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