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Aug 18, 2007
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~~ A Breeze That Has Wings ~~
It flies and it swirls
all over the world
All over the universe,
to the tiny curl of your hair
Yes, the breeze it has wings
and it flies like a bird
Entwined all around a solid gird,
it circles and it circles
So strong it is heard, by everything
it touches
The wings of a breeze
leaves nothing untouched
— ladywriter, Aug 18, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
I did, thank you.
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