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Thinking of You

At times when I think of you,

like now,

I think of a favorite toy

 

Every little girl had one,

even some little boys

 

They took it to bed with them at night,

to sleep and hold real tight

 

And that’s how I think of you,

like now,

When I’m not in your arms,

I don’t feel right

 

So close inside my mind,

I drag you around like my little toy

 

Loving thoughts I carry of you,

And I simply do enjoy

— ladywriter, Aug 18, 2007

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