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Aug 18, 2007
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To My Lord
So beautiful to me your greying head
you cared through years when none else did
Crushed of body, mind and soul. I died inside a thousand times
only to awaken in heavens arms divine.
O, the delight of dawn increased my joy as deep as ocean blue.
Sorrow washed upon the shore
a broken empty shell no more.
Now healed to revere, I serve
a glimpse of light, the world, a curve
His smile, His grace
the sunny sky
Intertwine in heavens place. by Loriei Swenson [email protected]
— Lorilei, Aug 18, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
This is lovely, heartfelt and touching.
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