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To My Lord

So beautiful to me your greying head

you cared through years when none else did

Crushed of body, mind and soul. I died inside a thousand times

only to awaken in heavens arms divine.

O, the delight of dawn increased my joy as deep as ocean blue.

Sorrow washed upon the shore

a broken empty shell no more.

Now healed to revere, I serve

a glimpse of light, the world, a curve

His smile, His grace

the sunny sky

Intertwine in heavens place. by Loriei Swenson [email protected]

— Lorilei, Aug 18, 2007

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