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Gangsta Puppies


 

Gangsta puppies is on da loose

They gonna try ‘n’ cook yer goose

You probl’y best be gone, vamoose

‘cuz gangsta puppies is on da loose!

— waterdragon, Aug 18, 2007

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waterdragon

18 years 10 months ago

True statement!

They derive their power from the pack -- don't know that that really isn't power -- it's bravado covering fear. The greater the fear, the more blustering the bravado -- I've been there. Fortunately, one doesn't have to stay there, just depends on who they really are inside and what they genuinely want for themselves...

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