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Aug 18, 2007
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MY QUEEN
She smiles alot,
such a beauty is her;
with a nice brow that glitters.
she has a step like my guiter.
Her hips don’t lie,
it makes me fly.
Prettier than beeuty,
madonna attested it.
She looks English,
but she’s an african.
A rare so fine with radiating chasm,
a mer maid coined from paradise.
A tale i had that she hails from the sky.
Words are not enough to express her smiles
— ellisville, Aug 18, 2007
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