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MY QUEEN

She smiles alot,

such a beauty is her;

with a nice brow that glitters.

she has a step like my guiter.

Her hips don’t lie,

it makes me fly.

Prettier than beeuty,

madonna attested it.

She looks English,

but she’s an african.

A rare so fine with radiating chasm,

a mer maid coined from paradise.

A tale i had that she hails from the sky.

Words are not enough to express her smiles

— ellisville, Aug 18, 2007

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ladywriter

18 years 10 months ago

My Queen

I am not big on Critiquing, but I can say, "That is beautiful". ladywriter

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