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Aug 18, 2007
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This Ole House
Alone in the darkened house at night
Walking down the long corridor.
You hear a series of noises.
You feel a sense of terror, like never before.
You feel eyes watching you.
Your pulse begins to race.
The pressure of a touch upon your skin
Your heart stops beating in its place.
This ole house, its centuries old
The floorboards creak, as you step gingerly.
Suddenly from out of nowhere
You hear a scream, like that of a banshee.
You race into your room
Slam shut the door behind you.
In the darkness as your eyes adjust
The temperature drops around you.
Sheer terror, takes your breath away
Your knees begin to fail.
You blackout as your head hits the floor.
Your face is sallow and pale.
When you come around
You’re lying in your bed.
The terror that you truly felt
It was all in your head.
— bellavistabear, Aug 18, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
You have such a gift for poetry,
bellavistabear
18 years 10 months ago
Nothing Wrong with Stephen King Entertainment
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