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Montana Sky

I left my home in California Looking for some room to breathe. Found myself in Montana It seemed like a place to be free.   Its called Big Sky Country Where the mountain tops soar. Clear blue skies extend forever Who could ask for anything more.   No smog, no congestion, no crime Living your life beneath the Montana Sky The spaces between heaven and earth Sets your spirit free, and gives you wings to fly.   Towering Pines reaching toward the heavens Wide opens spaces, with room to roam. It’s a special place called Montana It’s the place that I call home.  
— bellavistabear, Aug 18, 2007

Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

Gonna be a dental floss tycoon?

Sorry, couldn't resist, love Zappa. But seriously man, you want to see some wide open spaces? Visit Australia. You have a place to stay here, my place. cheers, Jess
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bellavistabear

18 years 9 months ago

Well thanks...

I may have to take you up on the invitation. Have always wanted to visit your country. I hear that much like my own, it's a beautiful country with a variety of climates and scenery. The same goes for you? Have you ever been to the States? Should you ever venture this way you have an open invitation to stay here as well. Thanks again, Brian (bellavistabear)
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

thanks man

Have only ever traveled outside Australia to New Zealand and Ireland. NZ the home of my relatives and Ireland the most beautiful country and people on earth. cheers, Jess

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