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Love worth Finding

Love worth finding Is love worth waiting for. It’ll happen when you least expect it It might come a knockin on your door.   If you’ve been searching for love In all the wrong places. If you’ve not found love In familiar faces.   Then love worth finding Is what you’re waiting for. If what you’re seeking You think can’t be found.   You need to stop looking For love is all around. Love worth finding Is love worth waiting for.   Love cannot be created It can’t be willing into being. If what you want Is not what you’re seeing.    Then love worth finding Is what you’re waiting for.
— bellavistabear, Aug 18, 2007

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bellavistabear

18 years 9 months ago

Love the technical critique

It's interesting, when I'm writing something..even though I may read it over and over before actually posting it..sometimes it just takes another pair of eyes and/or ears to see/hear something that just does't work. Thanks so much! Will see what I can do. Brian (bellavistabear)

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