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Aug 18, 2007
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Pleasure Cruise
We boarded the ship in Miami
Bound for a Bermuda port of call.
We have to cross through the triangle
Unaware of an impending squall.
The sky grew dark as night
The clouds were menacing.
The ship began to jump
As if riding on a spring.
Violent claps of thunder
Echoed through the halls.
Panic spread like a virus
The world suddenly felt so small.
The walls began to fade
The floor to fall away.
Floating in a glowing mist
Your senses give way.
Is this death, are we in heaven
The silence is so loud.
The surroundings seem so surreal
Could we be floating in a cloud?
Had this pleasure cruise
Passed through the Devil Seas?
Had the Bermuda Triangle once again
Made victims, of you and me?
— bellavistabear, Aug 18, 2007
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