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Aug 18, 2007
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White Roses
It was a Sunday in September
The day that I proposed.
I gave you a diamond.
And a single white rose.
Standing at the alter
In a simple country church.
Adorned with White Roses
No longer would I search.
You made your way down the aisle
In a flowing crimson gown
With a bouquet of white roses.
My tears were falling down.
The night of our first anniversary
White roses did abound.
With candlelight and champagne
My heart began to pound.
Six months later as I held you
I kissed you, and you smiled.
I gave you a single white rose
For the birth of our first child.
— bellavistabear, Aug 18, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 9 months ago
This is one of those poems
bellavistabear
18 years 9 months ago
Hmmmmm....
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