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Aug 18, 2007
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machine wheel
climb in and the heat is electric and old
decaying plastic and hot radio spitting out retro rock
dirty stink of cigarettes
burning engine oil
squeak goes the gas pedal
worn smooth to the metal
exposed like the shiny eye of bone
press down on this cyclops
and the sedan lurchs sloppily foreward
pulling on its inertia
my arm is burning on the ragged fuzz
of doorest
i take a lungfull of that vintage scent
passing feilds and barns
dreaming in my wheel machine
..O..
— orgami, Aug 18, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
Oh man, you dragged me down that road with you.
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