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Aug 18, 2007
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Blurred
Between the lines
and shaking
in an electric migraine.
You are…
blurred to me
silver screen,
mmmmmmm,
take care.
There is no breath now,
not even the kind I breathe.
Just alcohol,
and a Spanish dialect.
How advanced must you be
to understand me?
Get between my lines,
read me,
deflate me.
Rearrange me.
And change my mind
you.
Create.
— Conect11, Aug 18, 2007
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Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 9 months ago
mmm, I have a strange relationship with my 'puter
Quillsvein1
18 years 9 months ago
Feeling
Quillsvein1
18 years 9 months ago
Feeling