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Blurred

    Between the lines and shaking in an electric migraine.   You are… blurred to me silver screen, mmmmmmm, take care.   There is no breath now, not even the kind I breathe. Just alcohol, and a Spanish dialect.   How advanced must you be to understand me?   Get between my lines, read me, deflate me. Rearrange me. And change my mind you. Create.    
— Conect11, Aug 18, 2007

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Quillsvein1

18 years 9 months ago

Feeling

is present here. your beat-ness reasserts itself quite strongly. the sometimes impossible nature of human communication is communicated in the poem. a a paradox. sweet!
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Quillsvein1

18 years 9 months ago

Feeling

is present here. your beat-ness reasserts itself quite strongly. the sometimes impossible nature of human communication is communicated in the poem. a a paradox. sweet!