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Aug 17, 2007
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torn rivers
waking alive in pre morning light
birds singing exotic trills
my mind thrashing with raw emotion
and burned memories
charred and sooty
they cling to my throat like choked tears
love fills my eyes
and spills from my hurting chest
i cling to my emptiness
and walk the hall of ghosts
hearing their voices soft and soothing
seeing them warm and hollow once
more
their touch
their laughter
i shiver
and turn over
once more
..O..
— orgami, Aug 17, 2007
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Lenny of Cohen
18 years 10 months ago
Threw
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Shiver
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