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Nothing

Blocked obliterated torn up I have to fell something fall away baby and stay covered up in me scream and bleed subtley. Breathe mmmmm… stain me cover me she is in for nothing, and me. I seep and weep the bondage is clean. So please, cut me deeply. Bleed, serenade me see believe in me.
— Conect11, Aug 17, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

I get the raw emotion

but not sure what it is about. I feel like I missed something in the lines "she is in for nothing, and me." cheers, Jess