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Tears
Tears
By Alexander Duque
Why my tears fall I can never explain.
Might because I’m in such pain.
Tear drops as it falls to my cheek,
Some are bitter and some are sweet.
As I cry in tears I feel so sick.
As lay at night I couldn’t sleep,
Thinking of something deep.
It makes my body so weak,
So I write and fight instead.
A tear flows when I’m in sorrow,
Seems like Ill never see the sun tomorrow.
Emotion I have just couldn’t hide,
Release what I feel inside.
I find my self in tears,
When my heart is torn.
Pain deeply I feel,
She stubs me with a thorn.
My heart beats faster,
As I catch my breath
Vision of darkness,
An early death.
Tears flow when I’m all alone,
An outcast cause I’m on my own.
I’m trembling shaking in fear,
No one care to listen what I feel.
Tears fall when I’m depress,
Tears fall when I’m in stress.
As my tears fall I feel relieved,
Pain was gone, I couldn’t believe.
Why my tears fall, it’s hard to explain.
But after I got a lot to gain.
Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
Just my thing, Alexander
Mark
18 years 10 months ago
Nice Alexander
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