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24 HOUR PRAYER
I would like to challenge the world to have one day of peace, something this great land of ours really and truly needs For one day of peace, can we show each other a little human kindness, just leave all the bad memories and negativity behind us, as we say a prayer in silence For one day of peace, can we say no to anger and hello to love, for 24 hours, just think with our hearts, instead of always using our guns For one day of peace, can we truly be honest, not as an American or politician, but as one single person on this earth, that can see what the problem is For one day of peace, can you imagine such an enormous accomplishment, to only show each other love instead of sin and violence For one day of peace, can we think of togetherness, instead of so much seperation, be more humanitarian, and help heal this nation For one day of peace, are we willing to ignore hatred and embrace human exceptance, we only have one chance at life, I'd rather enjoy it, than spend the rest of my life trying to forget it
Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
I adore the concept
TONI SEARS
18 years 10 months ago
Is It a wish?
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
re-reading it and thinking about it, yes
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