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ladywriter
Aug 16, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I Can

I’ve become so many persons

to satisfy the needs

of many of you

 

Many times I’d lose myself

Days are constant blue

 

Yes, I know just

who I am

You wouldn’t understand

 

My words, my ways,

confuses you

To change me

no one can…

I can

— ladywriter, Aug 16, 2007
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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

perfect.

I still vote a 5 though shouldn't "confuses" be "confuse"? I could write an essay on this. The ways we adapt... nah, don't need to. You just said it. cheers, Jess
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SLoEDdie

18 years 10 months ago

luv this poem

awsome poem, how many people are we that we trully are not? i am the only one that can change it? made me really think and strongly hit me, loved your poem!
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ladywriter

18 years 10 months ago

SLoEDdie

I am glad you enjoyed this poem. Think of where we were 27 years. Would this have applied to you then?? Thanks again - ladywriter

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