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a dreamly wish
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a wish i only dream of"
as i wait to the day, to find what i was
here for.
spoken: when i just wonder or know that everyone
will be happy if i was gone.
song: a dreamly wish
as i close my eyes when i sleep
i dream where or what was i here for.
a dream of a young girl like me.
but diffrent a girl who wasn’t so shy or
scared of people.
a girl who was happy not cryin every
single second in her life!!!!
i wonder if i ever will change?
will i be this way my time here on earth?
spoken: everytime i breath i not loved
a girl who was loved every second in her life…..
a dream…. a perfect girl…. that i never…. will
be……
as i sleep i am happy of that girl i just wish i was.
that i will never be…
a girl with no low self extem…
a girl that wasn’t so shy
a girl that was pretty and not heavy set….
a girl that i only dream of that i just wish i can be….
but her with me
when i see my self i am just a ugly werid thing
that girl she was everything i can ecer hope for…
a girl that i wish will take over my life, as i will die.
i know my parents will be happy with that one
girl!!!!! i know everyone will be cause it is true,
i know it be………… i just wish dreamly like i wish i was
that girl………………..
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waterdragon
18 years 10 months ago
Dreams do come true
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