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tears/i just want/ broken tears
TEARS
The very momment i was born
Even when i was asleep
A time with all sorrow
Rating and beating with my heart
Sad i always am, i always have tears in my eyes, and in my heart.
i just want all the pain to go away.
i want all the heart and fear go away.
i just want to die,die in pain, no i want
to have no pain no more.
everyday i cry everyday i am lonely, everyday i am lonely and not loved.
I JUST WANT
broken tears
"my tears are falling for the hurt
in my heart.my heart beats and your the
only one who can hear it.close your eyes,
and listin to my heart,my heart is crying.
my heart is closing into a deep pain,
where sorrow is my heart wants out.
my love for you is growing weaker and your
the only one who can make it better.
"my words are broken in depts of hurt
the love the beat only beats for you.
my heart is closing and death shall be here?
and thy beat shall stop?
then my heart will close and i will
be lost and forgotten,in my own pain to tears
are coming, to i die….
MY TEARS ARE FALLING ARBall
Amandarose ball
inspired of grandmal and grand
pal and couzin april lynn
cazad.
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IKnowNoBox
18 years 8 months ago
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