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tears/i just want/ broken tears


TEARS

The very momment i was born

Even when i was asleep

A time with all sorrow

Rating and beating with my heart

Sad i always am, i always have tears in my eyes, and in my heart.

 

 

i just want all the pain to go away.

i want all the heart and fear go away.

i just want to die,die in pain, no i want

to have no pain no more.

everyday i cry everyday i am lonely, everyday i am lonely and not loved.

I JUST WANT

broken tears

"my tears are falling for the hurt

in my heart.my heart beats and your the

only one who can hear it.close your eyes,

and listin to my heart,my heart is crying.

my heart is closing into a deep pain,

where sorrow is my heart wants out.

my love for you is growing weaker and your

the only one who can make it better.

"my words are broken in depts of hurt

the love the beat only beats for you.

my heart is closing and death shall be here?

and thy beat shall stop?

then my heart will close and i will

be lost and forgotten,in my own pain to tears

are coming, to i die….

MY TEARS ARE FALLING ARBall

Amandarose ball

inspired of grandmal and grand

pal and couzin april lynn

cazad.

— am i loved, Aug 16, 2007

Critiques

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

This very poem will be among a treasure of reflection for you..

when I started keeping Journals I never had the true meaning of them until a decade later and now I tear apart my storage for one scrape ,to dial my past (one moment in my past ) and look in on myself ,so that I may use it for a toehold to Develop , advance, and ascend .What I would have Given to have such a talent . I will stay tuned to you. in ink, Dabbler

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