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i am crying/ loved-hearted


I AM CRYING

I alway wonder why i am so diffrent

A time only once i will none be sad,

My very only time,but now this none.

Cause only i fell this way everday

Ripe tears from my eyes .

You are the only one who can hear my sorrow.

I only wish it can all go away

Now all i am or doing is

Great crying everyday

IAM CRYING.

 

 

Lonely again as i feel all the time .

O’love is what i really wish i am

Very much do i love all but none love back

Everyday i cry,everydayi am broke,my

Heart is exploading with blood and pain.

Eeverytime my heart beats it explodes!

A death i am willing to do i am

Really in to much pain to live,

Time can heal a wounder haert.

Everywhere everytime my heart is in pain

Doing nothing but beatting and crying everyday,but my heart is nothing but a

LOVED-HEARTED… to one and all

LOVE-HEARTED

— am i loved, Aug 16, 2007

Critiques

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ladywriter

18 years 10 months ago

I Am Crying

Good morning. I just finished reading several of your pieces. I can relate to them very well. They said more than what was put on paper and deep. I like each and every one of them. One thing I will say if you allow me. If it was not intentional; double-check your spelling, it makes all the difference in the world. It will be like putting on a pretty dress when your face and hair is looking sooooo good. You have a very blessed day today. Sista ladywriter

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