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Aug 15, 2007
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Thoughts of You
Oh, the thought of you caresses me,
your eyes seem to undress me.
I am naked in body and mind
You traveled my body with your own,
I thought you to be a clone
there seem so many of you
You called my name,
You whispered, “I love you”.
The words seem so far away
but you were in me
I know, because
I felt you –
I touched you –
I felt your face –
I did not hold back any longer,
and I collapsed,
from the climax of it all
I slept, just where you left me…
In your arms
— ladywriter, Aug 15, 2007
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purplemoondoll
18 years 10 months ago
Wow
ladywriter
18 years 10 months ago
purplemoondoll
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
lady, perhaps my muse is having an affair with you
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