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ladywriter
Aug 15, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Shared Love

 

You,

Explored my body

so delicate-ly

 

I came…

just like the sea

 

Roaring, muttering,

thrashing & crashing

 

With a passion

so deep inside of me

 

— ladywriter, Aug 15, 2007
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purplemoondoll

18 years 10 months ago

Wow

Awesome imagery here - short but powerful! Like it!
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ladywriter

18 years 10 months ago

weirdelf

Thanks, thanks, thanks so very much. Those were the best words I've seen you write; and to me. ladywriter
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SLoEDdie

18 years 9 months ago

nameless

I really liked this one, i felt it, it was really powerful. I dont title my stuff till later too that was interesting to hear you say that. why are we forced to title our poems?
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

SLoEDdie, I think titles are important,

They don't have to limit the poem, but if you can write a poem, you can write a title. Poems title "untitled" express a failure of imagination and a certain arrogance to me, just my personal opinion. Practically, it gives us a tag to lead us into the poem. cheers, Jess
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ladywriter

18 years 9 months ago

weirdelf

Hey stranger. Over the years and writing, the poems just started and I never thought about a title. I have a very vivid imagination. Being alone with my writings didn't always require a title; (my opinion). I have not been here for awhile but you will hear from me. I will definitely consider titles from now on; Thanks Much Jess I'm putting one on now; with a title already (smile)

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