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Aug 15, 2007
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Let me dream.
When I see you I loose my breath,
It’s like I give you my all with nothing left,
I act like a school girl by writing your name every where,
But this love is too real and I don’t care,
Your lips make me close my eyes and imagine amazing things,
It reminds of what your sweet touch brings,
Why don’t we just forget the world and build our own little place,
Just you and me,
the birds in the trees,
When you finally get on your knees and ask me for my hand,
We can start our plans,
If noone cares I know you’ll be there,
Your love is better than fair,
I have never felt like this before in all of my years,
This is can’t be real.
Don’t wake me up until this dream is over,
This is no ordinary love,
this love is sent from above.
Don’t wake me up!
— dat_shady_chick_2007, Aug 15, 2007
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ladywriter
18 years 10 months ago
Let Me Dream
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
You took me back,
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