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Don't forget me.

Don’t forget me when I’m dead and gone,

Don’t forget me when you’re all alone,

Don’t forget me when I’m not at home,

 

Don’t forget me when you say your prayers,

Don’t forget me when you’re really scared,

I’m by your side,

At every time,

I’m watching over you even when your asleep,

There isn’t nothing that I dont see,

I’m sorry that I can’t be by your side,

Just don’t forget and I shall rise,

We shall see each other one of these days,

And we will reminisce in every way,

Just what ever you do please don’t forget my face,

And never let anyone take my place.

— dat_shady_chick_2007, Aug 15, 2007

Critiques

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ladywriter

18 years 10 months ago

Don't Forget Me

This was very nice and smooth. The title was perfect. At one point it seems as if it was speaking of two different people, "to not forget". Glad to see you back. ladywriter
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

A girl once wrote a poem to me

called "Don't look away from me". I nearly cried when I read this, because I did look away, and it's been my loss ever since. cheers, Jess

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