Mine Alone

I like how spare and clean this is -- you use a few words to paint a huge picture! Good Job!!!!

so wonderfully done. I realate! I hope those scars have healed over. There seeems to be "triggers" that still touch them from time to time and you feel the "pinch" then wonder who you are talking to OR find yourself a bit on the wrong side of the road. Thanks, Mark

and Beautiful.Like this alot- excellent writing! I guess many of us can relate to the gaping wounds from time to time - I like the way you used them to build such a powerful image! Kaz x

cheers, Jess

Though needs a little fixin': I assume you mean vicious with the viscous. Also, newborn is one word. Unless, of course, the British do it differently. Thanx again for a smart piece, Chuck

a strong use of sigle word stanzes.